by Beth Apr 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Something feels good and I don't know what, could it be the way he talks to me or the way he says "Awesome" anyway I think I love the way he can just talk to me for an hour and not run out of things to say. I'm sure it's love but I don't know how he feels maybe he feels the same, but you never know. |
This is a cute poem, but, it lacked the structure. It doesn't show much feeling in it though. Like I said before, it would look better in stanzas and make a bit longer. 4/5 |