Interesting structure!

"When life's a delayed flight,
or even just a plight,
look for delight
and all will be right. "

Loved the last stanza. A great ending
5/5
*gem*

It's totes awesome, :) it's simple and yet it has a really deep meaning. Kudos!

This is really good i like it alot keep on writing!

There is alot of turth in the words you have written. Great job.

What's a life without happiness?
Supreme emptiness

Very touching words.
Take Care Cindy

Very nice

"When life's a delayed flight,
or even just a plight,
look for your delight
and all will be right." great words, I just picked this part but you did fantastic throughout the poem.