by TravTagz Apr 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You told me you loved me but that was all a lie |
by Liz
Hm...the last stanza kinda lost the poem a bit...like there was more to it or something. But it was an excellent write. I can relate to it so much...especially with the 1st two stanzas. It's like you wrote exactly what I went through. Great write!! keep strong.x |
by David
Oh well done. lots of ppl have read this poem. i would have expected more to comment and vote. so easy too. just say "perfect!" which it is. |