It Was Just A Dream...

by BlueEyedMystery   Apr 3, 2007


The sun is shinning
We're hand in hand
Smiles on our faces
Laying in the sand

Listening to the waves
Crash into the rocks
My eyes grow wide
When I see the box

Knowing what's inside
My hands are shaking
Tears cloud my eyes
My heart starts racing

You lift open the box
And there sits a ring
Shining and sparking
The birds start to sing

Now tears are falling
As you take it out
Knowing that your love
I cannot live without

You slide it on my finger
It fits me perfectly
No words are said
We're kissing gently

I hear a loud buzz
Slowly open my eyes
It was just a dream
I begin to realize

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Hehe sweet and well written, such a great poem i love it : )

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakeR

    Aawwww.......thats a strong and Very sweet poem and written excellently i realy love ir , so cute and full of true deep feelings and emotions and the words were so sweet =] great poem !! keep up the good work =] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    Beautiful poem i loved reading it, it brough back sum wonderful memories for me. thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow, that was beutifulllll... although i read the title before i started reading the poem, i got so deep into it i forgot its just a dream and so the last stanza bought me back to earth lol such a beautiful moment displayed so beautifully..ahhh. i think the flows perfect, i see no gliches personally.. and its great how though the title gives it away you manage to get the reader away from the title straight from the fist stanza! =]
    take care, and keep it up!
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Awe.. tht is very good poem.. its cute.. yet so sad cuz its only a dream.. I could imagine every thing as I read each line.. amzaing!!.. GReat work!!..^-^

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