Wow, I liked this one. It has a very unusual rhyme scheme, but I think you mastered it. It's good that you're such a caring person to him, a lot of people would have just left but you two are still together and in loooooove:) and if you can get through this, you can get through anything. Good work.

I found a grammar mistake;)

but your the one who always cared.

it should be "you're"

--Steph

"I've been upset, I live the blues,
But I try to be happy because of you"

I know how that feels though mine is a different case. Keep it up, great poem and nice emotions.

I really liked the rhymes in this poem. The romance essence was there and it was really good. I think your poem is better than my Sonnet, since I'm trying it. I'm slowly getting it down.

I really like this poem--you express a range of emotions, but all tied in together nicely. the rhymes work really well too...not sing-songy at all.

although I dont know what it's about necessarily, it hit close to home, invoking a feeling about someone that I have yet to put into words--nice that you could do it for me! :)

<<in fact, upon re-reading it, i think I almost want to email it to someone...>> :)