Very creative, it flowed very well, every line was perfect, great poem.

--steph

I like it, its really different :) that's kinda how alot of ppl see things and then in the end their sitting face to face with someone that can relate.
5.5
thanks for taking the time to read my poem :)

Natalie

Nice job on this poem!..

"Your sit in the cafe all by yourself"
[I think you meant 'you']

Again I liked the rhymes in this poem. Good stuff on this one. It was a weird read, but it's interesting. Reminded me of the song, 'the Gambler' by Kenny Rogers.

Wow...I really like this one. It is concise, but very expressive. It reminds me of catching someones eye as you pass them on the street...knowing you have some unspoken connection to them, but you'll never see them again... <sorry, kind of off on my own thought there...>anyway, great poem!

I loved this one to
Because its a great poem
and i liked the flow
and it rhymed well
and it never seemed forced

and i loved your choice of words

and the ending was a great way to end it

a well deserved

5/5

A unique write that I truly enjoyed. It all flowed flawlessly and the mood you created with your language was beautiful. The descriptions were amazing, I felt as if I was seeing everything witth my own eyes. Well done *5/5*