I gave my heart away.

by Teria   Apr 4, 2007


I can't stand the silence,
the whimpering or pain.
I can't stand this feeling,
it's driving me insane.

From time to time I think
exactly why do I live?
From time to time I think,
what's left for me to give?

The love I feel is not helping,
the tears are glued upon my face.
And, my life's finally ending
it's own gruesome race.

From time to time I think
why did he save my that day?
From time to time I think..
Thankfully, I gave my heart away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The rhyming and flow was, once again, immaculate. However, this isn't my favourite piece from you. It's sort of overdone. It didn't make me think, "Wow, that's unique!"

    It was still very nicely penned. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Another excellent write.

    I especially liked this imagery:
    "the tears are glued upon my face"

    5/5

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