Comments : I gave my heart away.

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Another excellent write.

    I especially liked this imagery:
    "the tears are glued upon my face"

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The rhyming and flow was, once again, immaculate. However, this isn't my favourite piece from you. It's sort of overdone. It didn't make me think, "Wow, that's unique!"

    It was still very nicely penned. :]