by Chelsea Rae
Powerful! I like it! |
by *Charisma*
It's a neat imagery with the lights. adds visualization to the poem. nice job with flow and rhyme. Good piece! |
by Gem
I liked this one a lot. The whole idea of the lights was amazing and unlike one i've seen before. |
by Jenni Marie
I love this... |
Aweh, I really liked this, it was sad but again had a happy vibe to it, keep it up Darling. |