by Twisted Heart Apr 4, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Who tends the heart of this ocean |
by Kelsie
Beautiful |
Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work. |
by Wallace
Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5. |
by Cindy
Jeannie |
Wow Jeannie, what a beautiful piece. Your imagery is brilliant! I could feel the power of the ocean, could smell the ocean. It's like I was there. I always feel that it is difficult to form images with poetry, since most of mine are about emotion. Very, very nice work. |