Another great piece. It was packed with good imagery so you felt as if you were the one tossed by the ocean's waves. good job!
Charisma*

Now this was done brilliantly
I could almost feel the ocean spray as i read the words.
To me, the ocean is one of te most beautiful things in the world, the mysteries it holds, the power it posseses. (sp?)
It's amazing and this poem did it justice =)
5/5
*Gem*

Wow Jeannie, what a beautiful piece. Your imagery is brilliant! I could feel the power of the ocean, could smell the ocean. It's like I was there. I always feel that it is difficult to form images with poetry, since most of mine are about emotion. Very, very nice work.

Jeannie
What a wonderful piece you have come up with. The imagert is excellent. WoW!

Who tends the heart of this ocean
Who comes to calm the rugged breath
And holds its soul with such devotion
Beneath its briny depths.

The picture you have painted with this write allowed me to close my eyes and view this winderful sight,
Take Care
Your Friend
Cindy

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Beautiful