Rain (Acrostic)

by XXTruthSeekerXX   Apr 4, 2007


Ribbons of misty shadows pour on the empty streets
Angels coated in black fly over the silence of the night
Inside the little houses, children listen to Earth's soft beats
Never ceasing, never ending, hearts will never hear delight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another fine written piece =) I really like your choice of words. The opening line is really amazing - it grabs the reader's attention. It flowed nicely too. Just a suggestion to use punctuations here xD
    ^^ but you don't have to if you don't want to :)

    Keep up the good work
    *Sorry for the late comment*

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poems short and sweet. beautifully written and the word choice was just amazing. Well done ~mel

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