This poems short and sweet. beautifully written and the word choice was just amazing. Well done ~mel

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Another fine written piece =) I really like your choice of words. The opening line is really amazing - it grabs the reader's attention. It flowed nicely too. Just a suggestion to use punctuations here xD
^^ but you don't have to if you don't want to :)

Keep up the good work
*Sorry for the late comment*