Teardrops...

by xXx Taking My Fairytales Back 2 StoryBooks xXx   Apr 4, 2007


There's beauty in raindrops
Redemption in tears
They wash away dirt
That's collected for years

Rain becomes an ocean
With powerful tides
Tears reflect emotion
That's hidden inside.

Store all the sorrow
Hide all the fears
Pray for the courage
To hold back the tears.

The rain smells so sweet
When the storm is complete.
The tears will deplete
All the pain of deceit.

Dewdrops and raindrops
Disappear when the storm stops
Eavesdrop on the teardrops
To find why the love stops.

Rain brings a rainbow
Or turns into white snow
Where does the pain go
When the tears start their sad flow?

Strength for the dry crops
Come from the raindrops
Nothing makes the pain stop
It just hides in the teardrops.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This poem is really good. The flow is great, the rhyming, for the most part is natural, some of it sounds a bit forced but other than that excellent. The first stanza was my favorite, it just really stood out to me. Well done. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Great rhymes! 5/5
    katie

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow! I really like this one. Sad, but true. Nice title!

    Ciao~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Wow, this was a brilliant piece of poetry. I loved how every stanza has its own personal message and meaning and how they were all tied in together at the very end. Superb job!

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