Wow, this was a brilliant piece of poetry. I loved how every stanza has its own personal message and meaning and how they were all tied in together at the very end. Superb job!

Wow! I really like this one. Sad, but true. Nice title!

Ciao~

Great rhymes! 5/5
katie

This poem is really good. The flow is great, the rhyming, for the most part is natural, some of it sounds a bit forced but other than that excellent. The first stanza was my favorite, it just really stood out to me. Well done. =] 5/5

Tammie