Wow.
This is an amazing poem.
It's a story, actually.
Very well written.
I do have a critique in one part.
Mama was crying,
The told me the news,
I told them they was lying.
Umm... The told me the news?

This is a reall nice and sad poem. I sometimes wish that my own father would do something nice like that.

It is a great read. keep up the good work. a 5/5

Kalee