Fear Of Rejection

by Goran Rahim   Apr 4, 2007


It has been many nights,
Sleep had said goodbye to my eyes.
Because a girl has taken over my heart,
Brightening my hopes, like the sunrise.

The heart is restless for her one smile,
The pen is in search of a new word.
So I can write a new poem,
For the girl to me, means the whole world.

Yet this is one side love,
As my heart is afraid to mention it.
It has fear, fear of rejection,
What if she refuses it?

That is the fear of the heart,
Talking to my words every night.
Will she accept me for who I am?
Giving the hopes some light.

Her pretty eyes and cute smile
Making me to say nothing.
Because if she reject me
I wouldn't live to see another spring.

I love you my dear,
Should I tell you?
Just give me a signal,
So I sacrifice my life for you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    These words are the most affecting things to say to a girl...If it's real,just hand this poem out her...and i bet she will beg you to be together
    I think there is no need to say good job...cos you do it everytime good
    Take care
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a beautifully penned piece. It was a wonderful read. I could find only one thing wrong with it. the bit "Yet this is one side love" should be Yet this is one sided love. Other then that it was a great poem. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Wonderful poem. Your a really good writer.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww so beautiful... you're poems of love and hope always know how to touch my heart. 5/5 beautiful work

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Everyone fears rejection.....nicely written....

    That is the fear of the heart,
    Talking to my words every night.
    Will she accept me for who I am?
    Giving the hopes some light.

    5/5 Good job. Debbie

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