by TamborineMan Apr 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
'If all goes well he won't come home tonight.' |
Beautiful use with words here. excellent writing, keep it up! |
by Mr M
Well, this is written quite well. Good style and form but I'm not picking upon the point or what the subject really is. A little confusing to me. |
That was so beautiful the wording and flow was flawless. 5/5! |
by Fsams
Wow what a great sad poem. I loed the way you have revised it and written if flawlessly. Great word choice. Loved the style and the message 5/5 all the way |
by Kaila
Very good rhyming |