You brushed back the hair from my face
kissed me on my forehead
looked me in my eyes
and told the biggest lie

i really liked this part...hope to read more of your great poems...

This poem was really good.

5/5

I loved it!
<3

Ok WOW this poem is AMAZING! ur so good at ending ur poems well! haha. i loved this alot and i know how you feel! good job ur very talented! :D

I love this poem. way too often i love you is said in a casual way. 5/5

Love this! especially the way it ended i was expecting something else, but the last line was really good!

Excellent poem the flow was good and so was the wording, you did a great job on this,beautiful poem well written, ~~~~5/5 keep up the good work your friend Tracy

This is fantastic! I really love it!!!

I really like this poem its very good and yea keep up the good work.Also thanx for the comment on my poem an giving it a vote lol..