Awe Babe<3

by Brook   Apr 4, 2007


Awe babe
I'll never forget you
You're amazing
The only one true

My best friend
Boyfriend too
No matter what happens
I'll always love you

So many good times
Its crazy to be so in love with you
But we must let go for now
I hope you feel this too

I'll always wait for you
For when we can be together
But this is all too much
Too much to weather

Enjoy this babe
Spread your wings love
Let yourself fly
As free as a dove<3

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really love this but there are things that need some fixing the repitition on the OO sound got kind of old mix it up a bit and get some synanyms it will sound a lot better and give it a special touch nice job tho

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Thats so sad but so sweet at the same time and i really enjoyed your title..great work!!

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was an interesting poem. It was written in a quicker pace. At times it seemed rushed and like the rhythm was forced but it all came together and wasn't bad.

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