Wow i never read a poem in such format before , its wonderful enjoyed it lot .

Take care
chavii.

Gem
I always love your formed poems. Something I wish I could do :)

Take Care
Love Cindy

This vivid little poem, very well done. I love short poems. I shall try a Oddquain, sometime. Peace and Bessings

Yay! New types of poetry! I love reading different types, and I particularly like this one. I also happen to love Spring. Thanks for writing the definition as well! You portrayed Spring VERY well.

Very good poem, Excellent style, I love the way that all of your poems consistently amaze me, you truly have a talent. I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

This is just so cute, short simple and refreshing to read...great write

all the best and take care

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Ohhh this was so beautiful!
The imagery was breathtaking, and the whole piece flowed very well.
I love it!

Oddquain? Lol. This was a fun style, actually! Mmm... now I have even worse spring fever. Thanks a lot! ; )

I really liked that! It must have been tough to write, but you did an amazing job. Although short, this has got to be my favorite poem that I have read of yours so far. Haha, keep up the great writing sweetie. =)

5.5