Another Scar.

by Domino0792   Apr 4, 2007


One cut leads to many more,
Blood seeps out however i feel no sore.
I shout out help, yet i make no sound.
I want someone but i want no round.

I create another scar,
Maybe I have gone too far.
My eyes are blurring, I cannot see.
Why does everything fail me?

All I see is blood upon the floor,
I shift to wards the blood stained door.
I grasp the handle and hope for the best.
Maybe this is Devil's own test.

She knew where she was going,
And that must have been down.
She fell into the water,
And died from her drown.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    Amazing poem! I really enjoyed it.
    I can't find many sad poems that impact me lately but this one did, thank you.

    P.S. - thank you for comenting.

    -Lizzi

  • 16 years ago

    by xxLivxx

    Wow.

    nice write.

    i loved it.

    thanks for commenting my poem :P

  • 16 years ago

    by emily

    This poem is amazing.. I'm hopeing its not true tho.. It's just so fully of emotion... xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Beautiful poem. much felt emotion. thanks for the comment. keep up the good workk :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    Wow... amazing flow of words... T
    The combination of words you used to express the emotion is great..
    Nicely written..