Oh so much to write about this poem. yet would be too long to write, it could go on forever.

well tammie. the description in this poem was excellent. you have not lost any of your talent from not writing. the heading all i can think of is tears drained. but i don't know. its up to you.

i kinda like your heading already. know that you can always talk to me about anything.

5/5 always. your bestest friend, David

Aw... that was so sad!! i loved it though and you still are a super awesome writer.

i think you should leave the title, i likes it.

5/5
Allanah

Sad, yet beautiful. Youre a great writer, no doubt about it.

The Angel of Secrets

This poem is very well written. Great use of words, and description. I loved it. I could picture every sene so well. Awesome job.

Thanks for the comment by the way. :]

Sad but brilliant.
I wish i could write like that when having writers block hahaa =]]
Great use of words, I could picture everything you were saying.
5/5
Bekkah.x

This was an extremely heartfelt piece, despite it's saddening theme. It gave off a solid feeling of despair and bleakness, which I like being strongly conveyed in poetry.

"The smile on her once happy face, the gleam in her eyes
Not a trace left behind to be seen
She is disappearing behind her facade
But that is beginning to fail too"

^ I loved this stanza, especially the last two lines.

Excellent work.