Cindy,

You write of love so easily. The emotional pull of the heartstrings.

"Feeling so fragile in your hands
Like anyone could break this spell
Lets blow the candles out tonight
Getting lost in loves sweet swells"

Good rhythmn and flow.

Always,
Jeannie

Amazing...i really can't say anything else...i dont need to.

Very good poem cindy, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

EXCELLENT WRITE MY FRIEND. 5/5 FROM ME ALL THE WAY. I THOUGHT IT WAS GREAT!

Beautiful imagery cindy

where in my dreams i'll forever stay,

what a magical line, well done cindy another excellent piece

Feeling so fragile in your hands
Like anyone could break this spell
Lets blow the candles out tonight
Getting lost in loves sweet swells

Your sensual poems are just out of this world, u so easily gives me that extra chill right in my spine with such poems & i hope you never stop that as i am getting used to this now.. :o)

all the best and take care

Really nice love poem. Great geelings and sentiments conveyed. 5/5

"You make me feel so beautiful
Looking at me, your eyes shine"

Thats one of the great things about love. When you see te look in their eyes, you feel like the most beautiful girl in the world.
A very happy feeling
Beautiful love poem Cindy!
5/5
*gem*

Nice to see a love poem from you Cindy.

When you take me in your arms
Closing my eyes I leave this pain
Tenderly kissing my waiting lips
These emotions drive me insane

Love these lines....

What an incredible poem, so beautiful and so full of love.
I loved this one.

This poem was truly great, your profile is sad, keep writing not only for your self and others but for people as young as me who need people like you to inspire us.

That was beautiful to say the least. I love reading poems about how other people have portrayed there dreams and can describe them so well.

Excellent!! There is nothing more to say.