Thoughts

by amanda flood   Apr 4, 2007


Its like a big black hole
and i am 50 feet beneath
i don't know how to get out
i am stuck and i cant seem to do nothing
all around me there are people smiling
why do i feel like i want to die
my life isn't mine anymore
something is pulling me down
for i don't know what i am suppose to do
why is it me they pick i'd like to know
they niggle at my thoughts
they want to hurt me a lot
they seem to love picking on me
there in my head all of the time
crazy thoughts sleepless nights
tossing and turning crying in the night
its a big black hole and i cant
seem to find any way out

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  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    A truly interesting poem. Many can relate to this poem and I feel i can also relate to this particular piece of writing. It was an in depth poem and I found it to be very dramatic but also enticing. Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam

    Very dramatic. as i was reading it , it was as though i was trapped..i could feel people smiling at me. It was weird. Very good.

    5/5

    Sam

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