I think this poem was really cute but seems like its sad at the same time. liked your different word choice definitly made this poem stand out. Good work~mel

A bit like me and you
And how I cannot surrender
Everyday it's like an interview,
To acquire your splendour

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favorite part

Really good.. till i got to "hullabaloo" then thats all i could think of.... lol what kind of word is that??// P.S. I put Stupid Quotations on hullabaloo by the way.. HAHA.. lol

(inside joke between me and Mr. He-NeedsATomorrow. LOL)