by Tainted Beauty Apr 4, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Fiery eyes pierce him, |
by Curry
This is wonderfully written. you did a real good job writing it! keep up the good work. |
Great poem very well written. The flow was good as well as the structure. |
by Lady C
Deep, dark and daring. Love IT, really good! 5/5 |
by Darien
A very strong start to your poem, and it managed to hold out throughout the entire poem. There were some verses where it seemed to be weaken, but the entire thing was very strong. The words you chose were perfect, and you kept the vivid imagery going. Great job on this one! |
It feels like this could have been a longer poem 5.5 tho i really like your choice of words. |