It feels like this could have been a longer poem 5.5 tho i really like your choice of words.
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She stares them down
her malicious grin never failing to intimidate.
His love has not tarnished,
Despite her attempts to desecrate.

thx so much for taking time to read my poem

~natalie

A very strong start to your poem, and it managed to hold out throughout the entire poem. There were some verses where it seemed to be weaken, but the entire thing was very strong. The words you chose were perfect, and you kept the vivid imagery going. Great job on this one!

Deep, dark and daring. Love IT, really good! 5/5

Great poem very well written. The flow was good as well as the structure.

Peace, Joe

This is wonderfully written. you did a real good job writing it! keep up the good work.