Comments : If Life Is Twice As Pretty Once You're Dead. [Acrostic]

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is suchj an excellently written poem, it is very clever. well done you have so much talent x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    It is the longest but one of the best acrostic poems i have ever read!!! has perfect flow and structure!!! i give this one a perfect 5!!!! keep it up jenna!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I like this poem because acrosstics are normally forced but this poem is amazing with such flow, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    You have a very nice vocabulary. I love how your write. Yet, this seems more prose than poetry. Maybe I'm just partial towards rhyming. I love your last stanza! And your title is AMAZING. Excellent work.

  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Wow...haha i dont know what to say other than this is amazing! It makes you feel, I love it!!!!!!

  • Interesting...a little hard to follow, but I liked it alot...I especially love the title and the ending...It kind've all comes together...I like it's uniqueness also...good job
    Jonda Beth

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I liked this one ALOT.
    It was very well written.
    good job.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That was very good. Although I did get lost in the middle, the flow is unique, but you realed me in. I think you're on my fave list now. well done hun.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This was a awesome poem. this is one of the best acrostics ever. great write. 5/5.

    class.' << whats with the apostrophe?

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awh this is real sad:[
    but you did an amazing job writing it.
    keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by xXallieXx

    I really loved this poem... continue writting and sharing your poems! a great thank you

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

    PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

  • 17 years ago

    by So Beautifully Broken

    WOW this is fantastic , i love the layout of this poem and the whole idea.espcially the title its very catchy . keep up the great work

  • 17 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    Wow, this is amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Great poem.. you did an awesome job with description.. i love it! real powerful!
    keep up the great work
    amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    I feel your style, you shouch check out some of mine

    Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by ...Jasmine...

    WOW... to make it acrostic must have taken time and effort. well done... i truly loved this xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent, I love it hot the first letter of each line made powerful statement, that is very unique and I can imagine it must've been hard, good work, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Suri dawn

    O my goodness!AMAZING! Very well written. O my gosh. This is so good. I am not even kidding!