Once again, you kicked butt with your rhyme scheme. And I love the story behind this one. Nicely done. 5/5

Fantastic.
The story told was amazing & quite unique. The flow was good, the emotions were clear & strong, and your word usage was amazing. You're a very talented writer & I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Overall, wonderful job! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Once again, wonderful! I love the way you write! YOu have such an amazing talent. The poem flowed beautifuly and it was flawless!
God bless 5/5
<3Tayyy