I'm impressed by the rhyme scheme you chose. It's usually difficult to have an ABAB poem make sense because... but regardless, you have prevailed!!! Great job. 5/5 And thank you for reading my poem.

Tina

Amazing.
The flow was flawless, the imagery was vivid - I could see everything in my mind, & as Tina said you mastered a difficult rhyme scheme.
Fantastic job! 5/5 Keep writing. =]

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Okay, 4.2? Not approved to me. Lol. That should be a 5.0. This was a beautiful poem! You had such a great use of words and the flow was flawless! Great job! God Bless 5/5
<3tay