by Jenni Marie Apr 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Each day without you |
Each day that I don't hear your voice |
by Kurt
I thought this poem, like all your others, was well written. However, it wasn't your best. The rhyming seemed to be forced at times. All in all it was good and still a 5/5. |
by Jason Rainey
Simpicity is best and you have used these simple words very well to pull across a feeling of love for one who isn't there all the time. Time apart tugs at the heart and your time apart has inspired a wonderful work. I like it. |
by LadyPearl
Great poem, all your love poems hit close to home in real life. Perhaps you could use a better variety of words. |
by Scrittore
I'm currently away from my love... I can't wait till he gets back. great poem!! |