I'm currently away from my love... I can't wait till he gets back. great poem!!

Great poem, all your love poems hit close to home in real life. Perhaps you could use a better variety of words.

Simpicity is best and you have used these simple words very well to pull across a feeling of love for one who isn't there all the time. Time apart tugs at the heart and your time apart has inspired a wonderful work. I like it.

I thought this poem, like all your others, was well written. However, it wasn't your best. The rhyming seemed to be forced at times. All in all it was good and still a 5/5.

Each day that I don't hear your voice
Longing to talk to you
Yet I know that when we finally talk
Always, I'll make it through.

Feelings I can definitely relate to.
Nice expressions.