The flow was hard to find beacuse the structure was so scattered... but stilll emotion was strong

I gave this one a 5/5. it was real sad but wonderfully written. good job!

This is sad...I too went through something similar to this and when someone tells you to your face you can't do something or your a failure it's one of the worst hurts/pains you'll ever have to endure so nice poem

Aww this is so sad! i can relate to most of it. you go girl, if you cant fight back, atleast dont give the satisfaction they want! your work is truely beautiful coz the poems hold so much meaning. keep it up hun! =]
nuff luv x

You can do anything you want with your life, with or without the approval of other people. Never, ever let someone tell you that you can't do something. because you can. as long as you, yourself have hope, faith and trust within yourself.

amazing poem though.
good way to express the feeling.
keep it up hun.