Good job very nice

This was a very good tribute but the sad thing about it was you gave the reader no picture in thier mind of who you tributed this poem for. I think if you closed it by saying something about her by name or title the work would be more meaningful. Just a thought Plot121

Loved it!!.great penmanship!...and an excellent way of paying tribute to sum1..well
chosen words!...and the flow was beautiful too...
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

This poem is really good. i loved reading it. thank you so much for your comments they really give me a reason to keep writing. hopefully i will be able to post more, but i can't now. thanx again. shanik

I found this poem so true and feelingsome. It reminded me of my grandmother. She was very special to me, so thank-you for writing this, because it brings back good memories. It must feel pretty good to you. You're very nice to write a tribute to your grandmother. I love the way you set up this poem. It naturaly falls into place as the poem progresses. Very Great job with this one!

This was a very good poem. I really love reading tribute poems because it lets me take a look at someone through the eyes of another. I can tell that you and your grandmother were really close, but the hurt will stop in time and then something else will inspire you. The only thing I have to critique on is the category I dont think that sadness really fits this one because it was more longing and missing I didnt really get sadness as a feeling. Nice work though.