Wow. I don't know what to say about this poem. It was passionate and powerful and i enjoyed reading it. Each line was flawless and there isn't any criticism i can think of. Brilliant job.

That is so beautiful dom. i'm speechless over it. 5/5.
love willow oxo

It's a great poem. I loved it. I had another poem titled like and this still in the making.
5/5. Good work!

Ray Blue