Wishful Thinking

I agree the last stanza was abit forced but it was heart felt none the less well done :)

Great poem!!! Its exacly how I feel about a guy I like!!! Keep up the great work!!!

The rhymes in the last stanza seem a bit forced.
And, punctuation has a lot to do with the flow. I've noticed in your poems you usually have commas and question marks, that being it. Though, sometimes it's okay.. it didn't go well with this poem.

You did a great job though. :]
Loved the poem.
The questions mostly though.
I love poetry with questions, makes you ask yourself a lot of things..
Good job. :] keep it up.

Just keep that flow going that's really working for you, no need for much rhymes and punctuations. Let your heart cry out that's what makes the poem you.

This was a well written poem. Although i have a few suggestions. One might be to keep the same rhyme scheme throughout the whole poem. Also punctuation can sometimes throw off the reader and doesn't give the same rhythm that you, the poet, had wanted. Other than that great write.