Help me (collab)

by David   Apr 5, 2007


This poem is a collaboration with my sister, Rebecca.
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Help me, I'm drownin!
Help me, I'm dying
Help me, I'm starvin!
Help me, I gotta stop lying.

I dunno wat I have to do
To stop this runaway train
All I know is this
Constant, aching pain

Scratch me, slap me
Shake me, bite me
Break me outta here
I want to be free

I'm not the faithful person
He truly thinks I am
I'm untruthful and lying
I'm seeing another man

Should I tell him?
He'll hate me!
I have to don't I?
Help me, please.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Very good i kinda laughed at the end just the way you said it but i loved it well done 5-5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Interesting poem, Had a nice twist to it. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Very nice poem, indeed...
    keep on writing...

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    How great to write with your sister. I've done several collabs and always enjoy doing them. Keep writing....good work. Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is an interesting poem David. It is good that you can come up with a poem with your sister. It was a good read.5/5

    Kalee

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