Nitin
This was another learning experience for me. You have taught me so much. Writing with you is so enjoyable :) You make things so easy.

Tired of drowning in my own tears
Pictures of your face fading away
Hope to come out of this midnight train
With your hands in mine someday

I just knew you would get off the train.
Thank you for making writing so much fun.
Love your friend Cindy

Hey this was a really good poem. it was very touching and also sad. great job on this one. xx

This is just...WOW! I'm speechless right now. It's the best poem I've read in such a long time. I don't think I've come across such a beautiful write. This poem is simply amazing. I love it! 5/5 You two write the best collab poems out there. lol. Keep writing!

` Glenduh!

Nicely written collab once again....can't pick a fav verse....love it all! 5/5 Debbie

Another collab from two of the best poets! =)
It was written so beautifully and you can easily tell that the way you both write fits together so perfectly..
Amazing work sweets!
5/5
*Gem*

What a lovely piece of poetry - the effort of collaboration reads seamlessly, the flow of thought so uniform and uninterrupted - great work my friend.

peace
shobhana

Its so amazing, the words go straight to heart and leave footprints of sadness of lost love.
You two are rocking team.
Keep up the great work.

Chavii.

You and Cindy write so well together. It's almost like you have know each other for ever.

Tired of drowning in my own tears
Pictures of your face fading away
Hope to come out of this midnight train
With your hands in mine someday

Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
Always needed you here with me
To our love I'll always be true

I really liked your ending.
Take care my friend.

Heyyy, How are you???
damnit I just missed readin your lovely awesome poems..I guess you already kno my opinion now =)
although the poem doesn't have a certain new creative idea..but still it has so much emotions and sadness that were put into it creatively =)

its so lovely, but you've had so many better written than this one ;)
anyway keep up the good work && sorry for not commenting on for so long...I don't have the will to write, nieither to read..but I'm in the mood now..lucky you =P

G'luck to you
sincerley yours
XxXxXxX

Beautiful poem your words explain a love unknown to many and makes this poem shine well done

Very beautiful with so much feeling and emotion.

Very good poem, I enojoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment some of my poems.

This was an excellent collab by the both of you. An absolutely beautiful love poem.
Keep them coming.

I can see where the first half came from. Nitin, only you would know the art of writing something like this. The whole poem blended perfectly. Great job, both of you.

Beautifully penned collaboration. Full of emotion. Nice job!

Nitin.
Congrats on our win :) Front page together. Thank you dost :) You were right we do write well together.
Love Cindy

This is the best poem that I have ever read. I'm really enjoy reading your poems. Excellent.