Fallen

by MidniteRain   Apr 5, 2007


One year, or maybe two?
Am I only yours forever,
When it's convenient for you?
I desperately grasp at the air,
Trying so hard to hold on,
To something that isn't there.
I really thought it would last forever.
But how could it last for long,
When we can never be together?
Every time I look in that mirror,
I see your face staring back at me.
So maybe I should just break it,
Take it down, just cry and break down.
I really didn't fall hard enough before,
Because I've fallen farther and landed harder,
But I haven't learned a thing.
I thought without you, I couldn't survive
Yes I'm still living,
But I just don't feel alive.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Malini Nair

    Whoah reli cool and touching specially the line when its convenient for you!!!!1
    Awsum !!!.....keep it up!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Wow tis poem...........has the same meaning as my most recent poem.basically i am i the same shoes as this perosn...............very good job.i loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by MidniteRain

    To the one I wrote this about, I just want you to know that I wrote this to let go of my pain, so I don't take my anger out on you, or anyone else for that matter. It may not be how I will always feel about our situation, I still do care for you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Omg, i am in love with this poem, it is sensational, you have written everything i have ever wanted to write in one poem, the way you wrote it was amazing and the last two lines were so strong and effective!!!! wow! cannot tell you how much i liked this poem

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