Wow, i could literally feel your desperation throughout this poem!!! amazing words, they were simple but the way you manipulated them was the trick.

Wow, this is so strong and sad, that's almost how i feel, thx for the comments on my poems, they really help, 5/5
gabriella

I know the pleading song way to well myself. I love how you leave this open for interpatation (sp?) on who your pleading to.

At first I thought that you were pleading to God, but as I continued to read it also appears that you could be begging someone else not to kill you. I always like poems that make you think and that have an open meaning.

You are very talented. I hope that you keep it up.

--Sher

I really liked this. Lots of emotion put into it. It did kinda leave me wondering who you're pleading to...or the person in the poem...but idk...its kinda weird. lol. anyways...i liked it. keep writing! 5/5

` Liz =]

Lovely job! Has plenty of feeling in it! 5/5

Wow....that was really amazing.. 5/5 i loved it!

luv always--- tara

Wow...where did you come up with this...it was absolutly amazing and sad...well done..this is definitly one of my favorites...

This is a great poem David. Another one your wonderful poems. 5/5

Kalee

Wow... simply amazing David, as always.. I LOVE the flow in this poem as the guy begs for forgiveness... wow... wonderful job as always!! 5/5
Much love,
.:Danielle:.

Very emotional with just a few simple lines. Leaves a lot open to interpretation...which is what a poem should do....All the best, Debbie

Unique and thought provoking. Nice job!

David
A very sad write. excellent job portraying your feelings..Rhyme and flow were great.

I plead to you
Please I don't want to die
Don t hang me now
Please, grasp, I did not lie...

Very emotiomnal and heart wrenching.
Take Care Cindy

A sad and emotional piece.
Nice expressions.

Amazing poem...

*isabel*

Well i plead that you write more poems and its nice to add your kids in 1 very well done

Much better than your other poem, i liked this one a lot, im pretty sure this was about hanging a person, i wrote a really great poem once about it for my english class but i dont know what happened to it which sucks, but very good you're a great writer, keep it up 5/5