So you think if people stop talking about you, you will die. Huh? Well... yes, maybe! Now, I remember myself writing a poem similar to this, a while ago.
How about this? “do a good thing and you will live forever”.
I love to think about things like this.
We’re going to live forever anyway, even though our names may soon be forgotten in this world. there are other world as well and we also have a spirit that is supposed to live forever and besides, when we’re no longer in this world, we’ll no longer care about having our names in the list of the names of the people who were once alive. Or maybe that’s just me. Hmm?
Thanks for the interesting read! it was well expressed :)

Marjan

Wow, I loved this poem! It drew me in from beginning to end! I felt your emotions more than I've have any other authors, ever on this site. The flow was unique, and expressions heard. All together a great write. 5/5 hun, keep it up!

-Liz-
ps: you've left your mark, I highly doubt I'll forget you and your poem! =)
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