Unspoken...

by Sam   Apr 5, 2007


Unspoken words hidden
deep within my heart.
Hidden secrets and
thoughts waiting
to be told.
Building up every minute
of everyday,
reaching the limit
of explosion filled
with tears that
could go for hours.
With no one there
to listen to these
words,and feelings of
loneliness and discomfort
that lay inside my heart.
The build up it seems
Its never ending
til' that one day
everything has reached
the limit,
and then it all stops....
no more burdens?
not until later.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lyric

    Hey thanks for the comment. im glad you liked my poem. honestly i didnt think my poems was all that great but yea i like your poem unspoken i kinda feel the same way right now.....so keep writing

    LYRIC

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Great poem so much said in so many little words
    its a great poem you write very well

  • 17 years ago

    by Alison

    Hey thanks for the comment on mine, you write really well!!! 5/5 . i think this is just wonderful. its really good. keep up the good work