"Your thought is just to buy a drink for me
Then you will say you loved me at the first sight
Let me tell you what is really gonna be
Your plans will be pointless to love me tonight "

I loved this title. I have to do it for a contest as well.
That stanza was amazing, simply cos it's so true.
You're an amazing writer!
5/5
*Gem*

This is gorgeous!!!!
this is simply beautiful, it flows so perfectly, and it is so believable 5/5
x
gabriella

Awww it's totes awesome lol Girl Power! Yay hehehe It's really good and kudos! ^_^

Aww this poem is totally awesome! i jus luv da way you have with perfect words for perfect meanings!
nuff luv x