Ah tammie. i know how you felt when you wrote this poem. i know most of it. but not all. it was excellent.

announcement: tammie is back! her poems are excellent as always.

5/5 David

Wonderful flow, excellent lanuage. You rock.
The Angel of Secrets

Wow. This is very nicely done. I can actually relate, and I'm sure many people can. I loved your wording that you used. It was a great read.

Comment #3

Excellent. One of your best!

"My chest sore, eyes red and puffy from crying
I gently lay down prepared for a restless sleep"

I think everyone has done that at least once, yes, even the lads.
You've outdone yourself with this piece, the vocab was excellent and the rhythm was spot on.
Seldom do i find a nice groove with free verse poem but this was amazing.
Well done Tammie
5/5
*Gem*

(Thankyou for commenting my fiance's poems. I know he'll be pleased =)

My sea green eyes slowly start to well up
Tiny salty drops glide down my rosy cheeks
Each representing a painful memory
Or a tiny piece of my shattered heart

i loved this1..^^excellent lineshe vocab was superb n rhyme scheme perfect!!..n lol...it flowed perfectly..like water..=)
excellent work!
xxPoojaxx

Another wonderfully written poem.. the flow was absolutely FLAWLESS in this poem... it was very clear and filled with beautiful descriptions.. definitly my favorite out of them all.. wonderful job :D

Another nicely written piece of poetry from you.

My sea green eyes slowly start to well up
Tiny salty drops glide down my rosy cheeks
Each representing a painful memory
Or a tiny piece of my shattered heart

I loved that stanza because of the discription it was so vivid the imagery flawless. Your whole poem was fantastic. Well done with this a great job.

With how much I can relate to this, I was scared. I understood exactly what you were saying throughout this entire piece. I hate it when so many thoughts are rushing through our minds while sleep strays from us. We hope when we wake up the next morning everything will be fine, but unfortunately sleeping never rids us of our worries. :(

Excellent piece. :]