Overall, you did a great job on this form. I think it would have flowed better if you added To find my true faith is what I need,

This line seemed a bit awkward to me.(With a shine in his eyes). I may have put sparkle, glow or shimmer instead.

Other than me nit picking those two little things, I wouldn't change anything else. I think this was well thought out and clever.

This was an interesting poem. The rhyming was smooth for the most part and the style was unique. I enjoyed reading this and i liked the special power it seemed to hold.

This poem really speaks to the reader. I loved it. I've never seen a Trijan Refrain poem before. You done good.
Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah:

So I didn't like the rhyme scheme too much. It was a little too much repetition for me. Yet, I loved the message. It was nice.

4/5

First of all i want to say well done i actually pulling off this poetry style. It's not the easiest to do i've tried but failed lol.

Secondly: i really did love the repetition it gave this poem an extra spark. Really creative.

Third: you made it interesting and kept me wanting to read this from start to end. And it is hard to keep my attention on one thing.

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Fourth: I loved the flow it seemed to flow very well i didnt see any errors throughout this.

Well done on a great job hun. Loved this poem it definitly deserves a wonderful 5/5
~mel

Congrats on trying a poetry style that is one of the most difficult that I've ever read before. I loved the poem but I didnt really like all of that repitation in it. Although you did a great job in distracting me with the message and all of the beautiful images that it represented. Nice work.