The spinning and the spun

by Kelsea   Apr 5, 2007


I am the spinning,
she is the spun.
And we've got no life without our fun.
And the world rotates off of
it's axis.
And I am spinning, while
she is spun.
The one I love stole all my fun.
And I breathe with him ready
to run.
I've still got my fun.
He will breathe with me
as I go and run.
I am spinning
and she is the spun.
I've left it all,
left my fun.
Eyeing the world rotating
right back home.
I've left it all,
including my fun.
The spun
got to keep her fun.
Whille I am spinning
she gets spun.
She's got no world
without her fun.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I like the last lines they were great! it had a good flow you made it an amazing poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was deep. I like the flow and words! It made it all so wonderful. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    Thats really good, i liked it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Lol crazyness thats really cool, its different too :) good write