Awe! thats so sad yet sweet! 5/5

<333always,
becca

Wow.. that depressing

Beautifull dark chilling....FeEl LiKe GiViNg Up

Wow, I can't think of what to say other then that this is a great poem. It reminds of Romeo and Juliet:0 Keep up the great work. 5/5

Awww that's such a cute, sad, beautiful love story. I guess it's more of a troubled love story. Keep up the great writing! God Bless 5/5
<3Tay ^_^ily

Awh this poem was really sad:[ but it was wonderfully written. i love poems that tell a story. great job! 5/5

Secretly to herself, she would always cry.
That was pretty random,
At least it was to me.
I'm reading this as I type.
GAWD.
It's getting to the good part.
Lol.
He finally got enough courage to tell her that,
But then she started seeing this new guy, Matt.
I thought that was kind of lame.
Sorry, I just hate names at the ending of the line.
It seems really forced to me.
Like you can't find anything else that rhyme with that,
So in the end, you chose Matt
I really don't like the suicide in this poem.
It's too cliched for me.
Other than that, though.
I loved that they were both shy
So they couldn't tell each other
That they were in love.
But still, cutting and suicide?
I'll give you a 4/5 :]

A strong, sad poem written very well. The themes you incorporated into it went well with the story-like piece. 5/5

I read your other comments for this and you guys must be crazy! this is an amazing poem and i love that they committed suicide, because first off, it shows what drugs can do to you, even thought it was the cutting that killed her and second, it showed that the word love is real. its often misused and abused, but if its true, you'd do whatever it takes to be with that person.

B.Bridges

Aww. that was sad. but great.
good job!

5/5

Really good, So It has been added to my favs. awesome poem, i loved it. :) 5/5