I liked this poem as well. Things flowed pretty nicely, and the structure was good. The imagery you created was vivid in my mind, creepy picture. I liked the ending. I liked how you showed a strong person, how she's above this influence.
now the stuff you should fix would be:
"what I see is a girl,
not just any girl I see,"
<<i don't like the repetition of the word see, it just didn't come out as strong as it couldve.

secondly, i saw some places that punctuation needed editing. however, that is up to you.

nice job. =]

That poem was so deep and sorrowful and i always like that image of mirror in poems

what I see is a girl,
not just any girl I see,
the creature hiding in that mirror,
I'm afraid to say is me.

Take care
Good job

What I see is a girl,
not just any girl I see,
the creature hiding in that mirror,
I'm afraid to say is me.

Wow this is wonderful! Really well worded, and it flows smooth, it created an image in my mind as I read it, keep up the great writing!
Sky

Nice poem! I really like it! well penned!

"I�m sorry, but tonight,
I�m not going to give up to myself,
I�m going to fight."

Just edit it :P to remove the weird symbols :)

TC :)

It is very original and deep, few lines really touched me. I don't like the last stanza too much but the rest of it is great, really beautiful... Metaphors are also excellent in this poem.