by Bryan
This is a very good poem, i know how you feel, ive just gotten over the same thing, but someone will come along to brightin your life, perfect flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
by Marc Ortiz
Beautiful poem! I like the flow in this poem! well written :) keep up the good work! |
Wow this was sad.. and yet again not someting I've read about very often.. you have such wonderful topics not taboo and not overdone, but also not boring at all. I really loved the last stanza its true you cant earn someone love it has to be given freely. Nice write. |